Timmy’s writing

In term two Timmy and 5/6mg have been writing persuasive pieces. We have mainly been working on sizzling starts. For instance one of the persuasive texts we have done is, summer is better than winter. Sizzling starts are introductions that grab the readers attention. We have made a persuasive piece on sport is better than video games.

 This is my work:

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This is my sizzling start about summer v.s winter.

Winter. Wait Winter?!? NO NO NO! Summer is much better than Winter because you can go to the beach and chill. What can you do in Winter? Turn into an iceberg. So I say Summer, beats Winter.

By Vikky and and Madison

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